Do you have to take a new Paragraph when another character is speaking?

Question

I am 13 and I have to write a book over the summer, the joys.

I was wondering I have finished my whole book but now I remember that you take a new paragraph when someone else is speaking.

Do I have to create a new paragraph?

Answer 1

Yes you do even if you're using speech marks. And by the way don't give your book to anyone on the internet if you ever want to see it again with your name still on it.

Answer 2

Unfortunately yes. If you sent the book to me, I would be very happy to read, and proofread it for you. My email is [e-mail]

As for what Linda A. said, shes completely retarded. Im a 20 year old college student studying to be some kind of Police officer...I find it completely offensive that she would insinuate that i am a thief.