Do you like her new poem?

Question

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SAD SHERYL

She sits and stares

Form her quilted chair

Will her daddy be home, today?

She waits upstairs

With a ribbon in her hair

Will her daddy come home, to stay?

She whispers ‘Why’

To the clouds in the sky

Will her daddy fly home, some way?

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Answer 1

I can see her in the window.

Answer 2

Very good write my friend. Sad Sheryl lives in every corner of the Earth.

Answer 3

So sweet and so sad...

Answer 4

Seems that Sad Sheryl would break anyone's heart !!!

  

Yes even  a caveman's..........

Answer 5

thats a good poem i really understand what its saying, and its not too long either.

Answer 6

poignant to the nth degree.

Answer 7

no- not even a little bit.

Answer 8

He is flying home even as we speak. Very touching poem in your inimitable style.

Answer 9

short sweet and too the point. i liked it.

Answer 10

'Why'.  The eternal question.

Answer 11

Somehow - I see this child's father - as being off fighting a war. I guess - it is this 4th of July thing. Actually - the father can be a businessman or even deceased.  Anyway - very good sense of separation and loss. ♥

Answer 12

Awesome poem! I love it! It's sad but VERY VERY VERY GOOD!