Do you like my 1st poem in my poems series called My McDreamy poems?

Question

My McDreamy poems

Series 1: Virginia is for Lovers.

Looking through my window

Leaves being blown by the wind

I wonder when life will take me

To you

To finally be able to see you

Tease you, kiss you

Like normal couples

In love

Looking at your photos

Wondering if you would look the same

Once you stand right in front of

Me

That picture of yours in that T-shirt that says:

“Virginia is for Lovers”

Makes me wanna go to

Virginia.

Answer 1

"Hi!"

May your Mc dreamy, dreams come true.

We all wish for a fairytale ending.

Well written poem. : )

Answer 2

I've never seen Grey's Anatomy....it might be on English TV - but (these days) I rarely watch it.

But, I don't need to have seen it to recognise the syndrome.

My youngest daughter fell in love with the strangest of people in films and tv....one of them Rik Mayall she saw in a stage play...waited by the dressing room door - met him, got his autograph and a hug....and although she said how nice he was ....she promptly fell out of love....so beware of meeting your photo-love.  Nice poem.

Answer 3

A wonderful poem.  I love your dream and happy hope.  I can picture the image of the t-shirt that says 'Virginia is for Lovers' - and the ending is great - it sums up your desire.  Great poem Damsel McDreamy!

Answer 4

this poem properly gave me chills! i love the 'lazy' feel of the penmanship, which is exactly how you feel when your in love! like the world stops moving, and its just the both of you and nothing else exists and if it does it doesn't matter.

great poem, well done!

p.s. grey's anatomy RULES!

Answer 5

You are in love and are  expressing it romantically. Hope your love blooms and flourishes.LOL.

Answer 6

Mmmm...McDreamy!! hehe

I love the last stanza...it so simply states the longing one can have for their soul mate, to finally find that person to take you into that far distant land of love, that often feels like a dream!

Answer 7

This is what I get:- S1 says this is the beginning but why are leaves significant? S2 says this is the end  S3 is S2 but to wordy and S4 is incomplete

Therefore I see your poem like this;-

Looking through my window

Leaves being blown by the wind

I wonder if one could take me

To you?

Looking at your photos

Wondering, would you look the same

standing in front of

Me

The picture with that T-shirt that says:

“Virginia is for Lovers”

Makes me wanna go to

Virginia with you

To finally be able

to see you

Tease you,

kiss you

Like couples

In love

Answer 8

I vote a dreamsicle for you!  Perfection dreamed is a dream that one hates to awake from!  Dream on, the person awaits.  Nice pen.

Answer 9

I'm happy that you are happy, but the transformation of feeling into a memorable poem just did not occur. I prefer Burger King anyway.

Answer 10

Absolutely fabulous poetry!  

Looking forward to reading more............

Answer 11

Wow, truly amazing. That's some talent you have, I look forward to more.

Answer 12

Thanks for the explanation of mcdreamy poems I too watch grays anatomy, great show, and by the way, you write well!! Good job!!! Cheers !!!

Answer 13

You just want to play with his boobages...

Answer 14

That is bloody brilliant. I love it. You really have a rare talent, wow!

Answer 15

Its OK. i dont like the last syllable on the last lines of the stanzas. they dont even have the same amount of syllables! Its kinda choppy too.

Answer 16

How romantic!  I think we all, at some point in our lives, think about our McDreams!  I like it  : )