Do you like my love poem for my boyfriend ?

Question

i already submitted a poem & you said to rewrite iht so i did & this is what i came up with...

how do i find the words to say

exactly why i feel this way

you are the one i think of all night

wishing i was holding tight

i can't help but smile when i see

you looking back, staring aht me

you're the one on my mind all day

you make my darkness go away

you make my heart jump with glee

because you mean the world to me.

arms wrapped around eachother

our hearts belong to one another

hand in hand you and me ...

forever more we shall always be. <3

i showed my friend chelsey & she said it was ah-mazingg ! :D

i just wanted your honest opinion on it... thanks ALOT ! ♥ ♥ ♥

Answer 1

i love it... it&#039;s pretty good... GREAT JOB!!!!

Answer 2

very cool poem, i like it