Do you like my new pome?

Question

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FELIX LIKES THE NEW FLAT MONITOR.

NOW HE CAN SLEEP ON THE DESK.

WHAT IS HE DREAMING ABOUT?

Treetop tweeter

nesting restless

fledgling flier,

Chirping warbler

flapping flutter

worm berm diver,

Feather flinger

fir bird follow

higher crier,

Soaring singer

songbird bringer

mystifier.

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Answer 1

A lovely, warbling pome.  Grace dreams of geckos and George does a Sphinx imitation.  I'm so glad Felix can now sleep at your monitor and accept the homage of your hands.

Answer 2

I Taut I saw a putty tat!!! I think it's cute ....

Well done,,,This POME is fine ,,,Just the way it is ,,,,Have a Great Day!!!

Answer 3

"Hi!",

Ah"?

Is your Felix bird chewing on the wrong worm LOL : )

or is it (Satan's Messengers)?

which I interpreted from (mystifier).

All the same,

Very creatively done, you never cease to amaze me.

WELL DONE!

I liked it.

cheers : )

Answer 4

Good Lord, does every p-o-e-m (U spelt it wrong) have to have a deep and prof-u-n-d (I spelt it wrong) meaning? Y can't there just B a cute pome about a dang cat dreaming of a bird?

I think it's priceless, Darling, priceless.

Answer 5

Very cute and fun pome.  I love the alliteration.  He's dreaming of the birdies :)

People should really check their own spelling and grammar before criticizing others.

spelled, not spelt

a lot, not allot

written, not wrote

I don't mean to be mean either, but I'm currently on 10 days of progesterone so I'm a bit irritable right now.

Answer 6

Well, it's certainly got rhythm, but a couple of the more vague lines need claryfying.

Answer 7

The bird is a word?  No, a bunch of words, good POME!

Answer 8

Very charming and very whimsical pome,and a dream to make the sleeping Felix twitch. I especially love the last stanza.  Thank you.

Answer 9

Awww TD how cute was your Felix poem, that had me chuckling and remembering the gifts my cat used to bring in!  Yep little dead gifts at the door, sometimes a bird, a mouse one time, she just couldn't help herself!!  Loved your poem!!!  Cheers !!

Answer 10

This one is magnificent. I don't know anyone who can use words the way you do.

Answer 11

ahahaha u spelt poem wrong it's not pome its poem but yeah the poems weird honestly I dont like it....sorry I don't mean to be mean but seriously I think you could have wrote something with allot more heart I don't see any meaning in it!

Answer 12

worm berm diver!!

Felix profanities after a miss.

hahaha!

i like any feather flinger. (nice words)

just dont put a giant cardinal on

for a screen saver.

ScRaTccH.......

Answer 13

Says Felix

"Ditch the monitor. It's the wireless mouse I'm waiting for.....c'mere my little precious! I like the way you move! "

says TD:

"Curses on you Felix. I'll have you rebooted outside berming worms if you so much as flinch. Now be good my beloved Furball."

Punchy pome TD! I like da boy!

Answer 14

[Yore pome is won off the beast eye evver red.]

You made the right decision to choose sound over sense. This is pure music, and pure joy. Ya know, after the fifth reading, it really does make sense. It's just that at first, the sheer power of the sounds obliterated the meaning. This is one of the few poems that reading aloud did not increase my understanding of the content. I just got lost in the sheer musicality. Besides, it's a real tongue twister.