Do you like my new style japanese poetry I wrote?

Question

1st poem:

Shame

Brain

Stepmonster

2nd Japanese poem:

star

sky

glimpse

sea

hmmmmm, think I'll win a 100,000. bucks in a poetry contest

{heheehee}

Now you make up some Japanese poems

Answer 1

You

Need

Helmet

Answer 2

uh huh

Answer 3

well its ok i mean its not horrible

Answer 4

Idiot

Worthless

Impudent

Dumbass

Answer 5

White

Bright

Light

Seen

Sight

...I'm not sure how these work, but there's my two cents ^-^

*Edit

Ah, now I kind of understand this style.. Nice, I like it. It applies ultimate simplicity.

Here's a better one:

Flame

Red

Wax

Drip

er.. yeah, at least I have the idea, right? ;D

Answer 6

this

is

cool

never

seen

this

type

of

poetry

before

Answer 7

oblivion

poetry

salvation

peace