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i just wrote it now in about half an hour any advice?

i am 15 by the way:

memories are the feelings and emotions that will stay with you for as long as you want them too.

some are good some are bad and some are the memories of decisions that led you down the road you are on today.

memories may be full of timeless regrets.

if you have no regrets at the end of your road, then you have lived well. never make a decision based on being scared because you will always end up in the wrong place.

some memories are confusing and stick with you until you work out what was meant and then in time, are often forgotten.

do not follow in other peoples foot steps. instead, pave your own roads and plant flowers along the way to look back on and remember how great life can be.never complicate life.

many people will never realise how simple living is. life is not measured on monetary terms, physical posessions or the amount of breaths taken.

no, life is measured on happiness, the love of others which you hold, and the amount of moments that take your breath away.

find yourself. not the physical being you, but the spiritual one.

why are we here? why is life such a thing?

why ponder these questions? why question the bases of your being?

just live and enjoy the present. play now, work...never.

do what you want, love what do.

don't work for money, but for pure satisfaction. if you do not finding happiness within your work, leave.

you may say it is not that simple, but it is. never make a decision based on fear, never make a decision based on money.

live without regret, and when you run out of stones to pave, look back at those flowers you planted and just be.

be with yourself for those final moments before the possible becomes the inevidable.

your body may not remain, but your path will always be there.

the flowers will bloom and grow so high that other will be able to see them from the paths they lead and you will be remembered forever.

living is more important than life itself so stop worrying about the little things and try to find the goodness that still exists within humanity, within everybody, within you,

and just be.

be honest but not mean

thanks! =]

Answer 1

Extraordinarily profound for someone who is 15 and I assume from the writing has never had the misfortune of suffering any kind of tragedy or injustice.

The more wise you become, some of those thoughts you have will change. I urge you to keep a copy of this piece somewhere and change it or add to it as you get older and experience all the world has to offer (both  good and bad).

Some of the things you say I have only just discovered for myself and others I've known for a while. A couple of the things in that piece I thought when I was 15, too. They have changed dramatically.

You are obviously intelligent and I hope you become all you dream to be.

Be who you are and you will never fail.

xx

Answer 2

...for fifteen, very insightful and true...hold it together and tomorrow will

work for YOU...enjoy...

Answer 3

It comes across like something I'd read in a fortune cookie

Answer 4

wow lol, i'm 17, and i could never write a piece like that, i'd get bored after one paragraph

but yeah, thats awesome :)

Answer 5

I like these creative words that are raw and fresh and living vibrant in meaning.  Words of light for a seventeen year old!

If you wish to publish it you can edit it but do not ever compromise the meanings in any of these sayings of light.  Keep that message pure in spirit and focus.  

Well said!  Bravo!

Answer 6

Really Good, Athough it is a little disorganised, it has great potential. put it into a poetry like form and it'll rock. your very philosophical, but this sounds somewhat cliche, but i'm sure most of it's original.

Answer 7

i think that it is very well written.

Answer 8

It sounds like your thoughts are a little unorganized. Hey don't worry it just needs a little reorganization and it will be a great work. Never give up.