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Hey this is my poem, and I hope you can help me make it better. It's not real i want a better ending. One that leaves you wondering and sad and touched. Does this make you feel... i don't know what does it make you feel? help me end it or add more or delete and i will try to give you best answerWe all gathered around the kitchen table thinking that all was fineNothing would ever harm usNothing would ever hurtBut deep inside our souls we knewSomething would always happenSomeone has to leaveSo the first person got up and left the table to go upstairsWe sat in silence with tears running down our red cheeks.The next person got up and left and said "I'll be back in spirit" We all covered our mouths and cried some morethe next person said "I'll be right back" and just leftLeaving two people there me and the other tears welling up in our eyes. The other person said "I'm just going to the bathroom don't be scared"None of them came back.Leaving me alone at the table with only my tears to accompany meLonely staring at the table where everyone used to be. It used to be full of people and adventureBut now it's only me...
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