Do you like my poem about country life?

Question

Pea Shellin' Time

Out in the country

Down by the pond

The old cow is grazin'

Where she's so fond.

Out in the pond

The boys are a swimmin'

Dreamin' of fishing

And dreamin' of women.

Out on the dirt road

The kids are a yellin'

Playin' hopscotch and jacks

Watin' for the watermelon.

Out on the green grass

The girls are a chattin'

About this boy or that one

You would think it was all Latin.

Out in the garden

are Papa and Mamma

Pickin' peas for us to shell

And we say "Oh no" with such drama

Grab you a pan

And turn on the TV

We will all shell peas

Yes even me!

We'll shell and shell till

The shellin's all done

Then Mamma and Papa will say

Go have fun!

Answer 1

Thats cute....It reminds me of my moms poetry.  She writes alot of poems.  Everything from religion to snappin peas.  Wow!  Kind of sounds like you too huh?  Keep'em coming!

Answer 2

that was a very nice poem I like it...(*-*)

Answer 3

That was perfect, reminded me of helping my grandma shell peas years ago.

Answer 4

.shellin' peas, snappin' beans and cannin' tomatoes.  Transported for a moment to my grandparent's farm...

Answer 5

Very good, authentic images.

"I was country when country wasn't cool."

Answer 6

a cute poem, about a cute house, on the country. very cute.

Answer 7

Very musical.  Now, if we can get Dondi to set it to music...

Answer 8

I think it's cute !! Family & Friends Make it All Comfy

Answer 9

When I read a poem like this

It makes me want to go and sit

Down by the lake and think a bit

Tis a poem like this I like

Makes me want to ride my bike

Down the trail and through the medow

Where wildflowers grow a lovely yellow

Times like this I do enjoy

Since I was a little boy

Thank You!

Answer 10

Its wonderful!!!

Answer 11

i like,i think it's cute!!!

i live in the country so i can relate to it  

:)

Answer 12

Hi

your an extrodinary talented writer. my children love your poems. I read 3 of yours poems yesturday to them. I shall read them this one when they wake today.

Well Done. : )

Answer 13

Wonderful images!

I can only dream......

Answer 14

I like it... It's real down home country