Do you like my poem? i can take constructive critisism.?

Question

i play sports, she does dance

i watch baseball, she does her nails

i know you so well and yet she knows nothing about u

ive known u for so long, shes known u 4 a week

we are so alike, and yet over and over you choose her, do opposites attract so well?

yes we talk and are good friends, but that seems to be enough for you no matter how badly i dont want that to be true

i change for you and still we are friends\

and now i realize that if it has not yet happened thruout all these years that it was never meant to be. i accept it, tho i wish differently

Answer 1

poems are very personal... this one seems to come from your heart... so i would say it means alot to you and it is beautiful... follow your heart it won't lead you astray

Answer 2

that is a h**l of a poem I know exactly what you mean it sucks when it happens but everything happens for a reason. I say if U want something bad enough you will eventually get it.....