Do you like my poem? it's a bit cheeky :P?

Question

Some say that my poetry,

lacks consistency -

but I don't share this view.

Slowly the penguin shifted,

as the whirling tundra lifted.

Perhaps: I use. Punctuation! incorrectly :~

This does not falter my thoughts' intensity.

Despite the piercing jibes of a "wit" or "critique",

I cherish the guidance from those with technique.

Answer 1

It's somewhat cool: the message is outright clear and the rhymes are simple. Just bear in mind that speaking in rhymes is not the same as making poetry. You shouldn't take long to find out the difference but if you're gonna linger i'll give you the finger  -_-*,,|,

see what I mean?

Answer 2

This does not FALTER my thoughts' intensity

IS NOT  a sentence.  You are misusing the word falter.  

Stay in school.

Answer 3

Hmmm...

I sorta kinda liked it,

no matter how you typed it.

it was pretty cool,

but it should be about a fool.

About the fool part,

I didn't mean..

it I just had to make it rhyme  

Answer 4

Hey... Its quirky i likes it!

Answer 5

If I was you

I'd keep on going

All the while inside you knowing

That some will taunt

With scorn or wit

But it doesn't count

Cause they're full of s.h.i.t

Answer 6

bet you were up all night trying to think of something different.

you failed just like nelly