Do you like my poem or is it dumb?

Question

Had a date at Club Fusion

Left my car running and it got confusing

Took some meds and had a smoke

Then it was days before I awoke.

Why is everybody so mean and bad

I just like to have fun and never get sad.

Answer 1

its is dumb, you just made a silly rhyme for a silly poem book, for adults. nothing special, just some lady caught up in her silly little world.

Answer 2

Non-dumb. Halfway to a really good poem...

Answer 3

not to bad, could use some work.

Answer 4

that's just horrible. i mean really bad. it sucked.

Answer 5

I dont know if it is a good idea to make light of the little girl who is missing because of that woman. Taste level a bit questionable