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Do you like my poem? plz give me ur opinion?

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im not a pro of any sort so of course theres gonna be mistakes so critique but be kind:)

Hush, don't speak and just listen for a while

Do you hear what I hear?

The damnation of all angels

Do you hear their screams?

Hush and listen to the demise of all Gods

Do you hear them dying?

Do you smell their fear?

No don't tell me you're looking for you are blind

never seen the light of day in your life

Hush dear brother for i also don't understand

How diamonds can shatter and how man can kill man

Look at the frost bitten flowers,

how beautiful they've become

when it's their last hour,when their time is done

Don't cry for they are free from all illusions and tyranny

Look at the ocean, what do you see?

A cradle of life or a treacherous beast?

It has given lives and smothered souls

Every ripple an erosion of the body with the promise of hope

So don't be scared when you're alone in the dark

you see the clearest when you face your fears and there's no where to run

No my dear friend don't cry out for help

there are no heroes in life, just old tired men

So now that your god has fallen and your eyes opened

Do you finally see what i see?

The light that darkness reveals

Do you hear what i hear?

The peace that silence brings

Do you understand it's a miracle we're alive?

It's a miracle we've survived

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  1. great!!


  2. its perfect hun! really great

  3. really powerful!

  4. its perfect, i love it.

    dont change a thing

  5. I am also a poet>>>>>>it rocks sweetie!

  6. ... honestly its really good i like it. (also i denied myself any religion at beginning of this year) i can relate.

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