Do you like my poem????????

Question

bottom of the barrel

as low as it gets

my *** is stuck on the bottom

as long as i can remember

don't hate me

because i'm down

don't hate me

i can no longer live the lies

don't hate me

i can't stand up

don't hate me

it's hard to be a man

don't hate me

i gotta lay down

and take a nap

life is a lot of work

and sleep is where its at

so don't mind me

if i just go away

and cease to exist

to the big deep sleep

where i can find it.........

frank

Answer 1

Cheer up, when the still and steady beat of sleep falls off rhythm, you shall rise again.  

Answer 2

You sound lazy! And a bit of a whiner. The poem is ok. But keep writing if that is what you love.

Answer 3

It's good, but it sounds more like a rap.

Answer 4

that's a pretty good poem you got there. I like it. I've put a few poems out here myself. I've get a friend who writes kind of like you. I like it. got anymore?  

Answer 5

Is'nt a poem supposed to be pleasing to the eye and the ear? Putting aside the content, you've just used the enter key a lot to make very short sentences.    

Answer 6

WTF IS UP WITH YOU AND YOUR STUPID POEMS?!?!?!