Do you like my poem??

Question

YOU ARE

You are my mind and soul

You are my hand to hold

You are my soft place to land

You are the gentle rain on a sunny day

Whenever I wake

I know you'll be there

To greet me witha good morning

I never want to lose you

Because if I do

I wouldn't know what to do

Just know that

I love you and nothing will ever change that

Because

You are my love

And you are my life

Answer 1

i think it's beutiful what makes it beutiful is it comes from your soul:] keep wrighting your wondrful  

Answer 2

I like the sentiment in your poem, but I found the language to be very predictable. I think you could improve this poem greatly by working some more complex emotions and really unique imagery into it.

Answer 3

hmm well its how you feel

then

I'll say

NOt bad

Answer 4

lol Don't listen to them

I garentee that all the women will say it's nice

AND IT IS!!

Answer this please:

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?...

Answer 5

Rubish

Answer 6

Cliche.

Answer 7

Garbage

Answer 8

lol, you`re my age, and also a poet, nice ^.^

i like it, keep it up

Answer 9

Pretty good although a bit predictable and plz don't say ONLY 14 because

i know alot of teens who write better than      s, it depends on skill, not age. And you have that skill