Do you like my poem? :)?

Question

rudely awakened

the noise

strangles me, suffocates

my joy

interrupted

it pierced my ears

the voice

that brings me to

tears

run away

leave the madness

behind where the harridans

stray

stow away

find your peace and sanctuary

a place, for so longinly

i pray

a wistful longing

for the past

a vengeful feeling

for the last

why should i care

for you my gaoler

so let me share

my plan

to run

Answer 1

yea I like it, its pretty :)

Answer 2

I'm not one for poetry.

But yours is AWESOME!

Answer 3

Fine , but needs some refinement. most of the rhyme is forced , which 'd make the reader halt at the end of the line or the stanza. The last stanza could B something like :

Why should I care

About U any more

Each had a share

That 'd even the score

And I'm waiting for

Nothing but to run