Do you like my poem??i hope it's good i love poetry!?

Question

Look down below,

to see your tenebrous shadow,

carefully follow you,

it wants to come too!

Two dimensional clone

you're not all alone

your sleuthing, stalking double

sticks with you in times and trouble.

(I don't know it was fun to write but not that great... titles?)

Answer 1

This is a great poem because it never actually says the word "shadow" so you have to think.  Great use of words.  You are a great poet.

Maybe, "Double"?

Answer 2

it's really good- i like your use of rhyming

keep writing!!!!

Answer 3

I´ve personally written at least 7 poems, so I have a litlle expierience, but this poem feels estimulating for people who think that are alone but aren´t. It was beautiful. A title, well maybe it could be: Shadowed me, Leaving me accompained, an eternal friend. Haha, really enjoyed.

Hope you like the 3 titles and that you grow as an artist.

XOXO,

luchofl

Answer 4

I think it represents a lot ... and poetry is a great form of personal expression :) I liked it, I'm sure others will too

Answer 5

"Wherever you go, there you are."

"When the clouds come, part of me goes."