Do you like my poems? Please answer this! ?

Question

On a winters day

I begin to pray

Help me to

Be close to you

Please Stay.

Another one:

Little princess

Don't cry

Your dress can be remade

In a matter of time

Little Princess go to sleep

Please Princess Do not Weep

The Summer's light

Against your face

Is so beautiful

On a quiet summer's day

Little Princess

Do not cry

Your dress will be remade

In a matter of time

2nd to last one:

I stand waiting

Waiting

Will you arrive?

It's the time you said

12 pm

Where are you?

I stand waiting by __our___ oak tree

The one where we sat you and me

Now tell me will you come

Then i see the morning sun

It downs pours on all my dreams

everything is not what it seems

Last Poem:

I hear your whispers

Your calling me

In the deep ocean breeze

Your on mountains

I'm climbing hills

Your onto bigger places

While I'm still..

Still in love with that one

The one who's like me you

The one who's love is true

The title's are

Winter's Pray

Little Princess

Not what it seems

Love

Which one you like best and which you like worst Why and then write what you think of the others.

THANKS!

MAKE LONG ANSWERS

AND I'LL RETURN THE FAVOR

AND ANSWER UR QUESTIONS

Answer 1

all of them were good but winters pray was the best  

Answer 2

I write poetry myself and I will have to say that you seem to be very good. It seems to come natural for you to keep on the subject and not stray off. That is very good. It is always a good thing when you can somehow tie the beginning to the end. Very beautiful poetry I must say. Little Princess is so simple yet very deep. That one is my favorite.

Answer 3

I liked them all. I just am not sure if I understand where you were going with "Little Princess"

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Answer 4

I like them all but your last two are the best.  It is evident that these two were written from your heart.  All writing should come from the heart, it reads true, not just a bunch of rhyming words.  Keep writing and honing your skills, you have natural talent!

Answer 5

I like them

you are very talented!!

Hope I helped

- ♥ Taylor ♥