Do you like my poetry?(girl who I answered to come here)?

Question

I am a poetry fanatic... so I accually attempted to write a poem and no just read them. Please post if you know about poetry. It doesn't have a rhyme scheme, it's free verse but it does have a rhythm so... work with me. Also tell me the parts you like and the parts you don't. Here it is.

''Empty Vase"

Bring me

An empty vase

To pour my heart into

For I have loved and lost and lived

And now I think I'm through

I hoped to god

That I would shine

For days and days apart

And now as I gaze

So back very far, I see it was all in vain

For the pain I feel

Will not recead

Until I'm clear at heart

Answer 1

i like it.

Answer 2

um, i'm not trying to acuse of anything, but i swear i've read that befoe. it's either overly cliche or copied.... sorry