Do you like my pome about computers and Yahoo?

Question

Electronicity

by Elaine P

My computer never tells me "no"

A hundred times I can say "go"

Unlike many people I have known.

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Without her, I can never feel alone.

With her, I own the Internet

Not for a moment do I fret

From me, she'll never ever hear a moan.

I hereby send thanks to My Yahoo

For letting me meet all of you

And for the seeds of Poetry we've sown.

Answer 1

I ditto Sher's comments, thank you Elaine, for counting our

blessings.

Answer 2

"Hi!",

I agree with sher, with all it's little gliches, it is still pretty good.

Well I traded my good computer to upgrade to a **** one.

But thats ok, I have 4 computers in my house, plus two laptops which, one came from the dawn of time but they all become useful. When one shites me, I just move along to the next.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )

P.S: can you check out my first ever Monoryme poem. thx. cheers: )

P.S.S: thx Elaine, I was just about to give you the link. I'm a bit slow today sory. I just sent the link to TD not relising he already beat me to the punt.

Answer 3

Yahoo  has given me an opportunity  not only impossible but  never even considered in my youth. Its like walking on the moon! ... or mars!..... with a friend. another rocket ride to the centre of my self. and it won't corrupt my liver.. . yes! thank you poets  and Yahoo

Answer 4

I totally agree with you. Yahoo Is great. I have met so many nice people here. And some Dumbasses.  But even with all It`s warts, I still say It`s the best thing ever Invented.

Answer 5

Geez....an editor praising

no blue pens penning

no "Dear Nos"

she loves her...

computer!

lol  We thank you too and your computer!  Well said.

Answer 6

What Pat said...

Answer 7

Without Yahoo, I probably never would have posted my poetry anywhere or began growing in my writing. So, even with all of it's problems and trolls, I love Yahoo....and my computer!

Answer 8

Without computers....so many poems may never have been seen by anyone but the authors. I'd be lost without mine, but it doesn't always cooperate like yours does.

Answer 9

ya i like your pome.

comps are nice perfect little robots.

yours is a girl?

where do i look to know what mine is?

:)

Answer 10

Who is her? i'll give you 3 stars 'coz it is not very good and not poor!

Answer 11

Funny when I turned on my pc today and saw this poem about the computer, wrote one myself yesterday about the same thing! LOL Haven't got the bugs out of it yet when I do will post!  Enjoyed your poem and nice meeting you too!!  Cheers !!!

Answer 12

A great line from the movie"Shadowlands"

"We read to know we are not alone"

Because of my Mentor and Yahoo, I now write for the same reason.

Answer 13

Yeah it took me a while to come around to the computer,,,,But now ,,,,Jeeze,,,, I don't know what I'd do without one I never would have "met" all the fine people here that have transported me around the world of Poetry which I enjoy reading ,,,100% of my job,,,

Once in a while my computer says NO & freezes on me or crashes ,,,It's getting on in age & needs to be replaced ,,,,I'd just like to say THANK YOU to ALL & My Computer for allowing me to enjoy Something I never thought possible ,,,,,Good Maunin' & Thank You !!!