Do you like my story Idea?

Question

pls tell me u like the story concept or not...my story concept is,a man found a diary in raily station waiting room.the diary was on a chair and no body is there.the man open the diary and astonished to saw that his name,address,phone no,i mean his personal info on dairy's first page...like it's his dairy...the man turn the page with fear and he saw the diary's january and february pages are written exactly how he passed those months and march page blank..then again it starts from today..and in diary todays section was written like tha.." my friend sam dead..."and after 1 hour he recieve a call from one of his friend and he listen that sam realy dead.the man realy scared.

the may,june,july pages are blank...8th august page is written like.." today i become a millionare"...and again diary pages are blank...and in 31 december page written like.." i become wanted by police ..dead or alive"

END.

so question is who is doing that and why?

Do you like the story idea?

Answer 1

Sounds very similar to a horror movie I saw a few years ago.

Also a story from the twilight zone.

Thanks for the extra 2 points.

You posted this on the Bangkok page

Good Luck

Answer 2

good and gets better then best

Answer 3

yes good one

Answer 4

yah its pretty neat and creepy since my name is sam, but i like it

Answer 5

Yeah, yeah, who really is doing that?  His mother.    I like the story idea, now I'm ready for this movie.

Answer 6

this story has nothing in it........

Answer 7

yes, great story idea

Answer 8

i dont know if u tried to summerize it, but i think u need to work a little on the details of how he found the diary and make it a little more complicated, relevant and interesting. by relevant i mean something that turns out to be connected with the story idea so its more believable.

remember that now the reader knows whats gonna happen "written in the diary already" which might make the story boring, so u need to make the story exciting like how is gonna avoid such situations or take advantage of them. good luck.