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Okay so about 2 months ago i asked a question here about my fake lives. You can find it in my questions. Anyways a lot of my responses were you have a great imagination, you should write stories. So i decided to. I gave my first draft to my language arts teacher and said that i needed more details so i did. I also changed major parts of my story. Also i am only 13 so i am not planning on being a professional writer or anything. This is just a way to clear my head. But please read it. It is about 15 minutes. But i tried to make it as interesting as i could and the whole grocery list was supposed to mae irony. Like you were supposed to think that my mom died then. But please read. Also give me constructive criticism, don't be mean and if you didn't like find a polite way to say that. Okay thanks for your help.http://www.writing.com/main/view_item/item_id/1465898
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