Do you like my tanka?

Question

Drip! dropping away

my tears feeling my own pain

being set aside

even with people around

we are all alone today

I know, kinda sad...

Answer 1

Yes , I like it ! Title : Tears and Raindrops .

:0)

Answer 2

Tear Rains . Awesome - really delivers a point

Answer 3

Yes I do in fact like it --short bitter sweet and delivers the message!! Cheers !!

Oops had to add something oh titles--- my fortay!!

Tears of Solitude

Rain Within

Tears Speak

Lonely Tears

Will try and post more later unless you find one you like!!