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Do you like or dis like this poem?

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Scandalous cadavers mimic

Their depleting surfaces

Cussing them emotionally for their

Relentless patterns of boredom

"Revolution "

It screams

"Fight these jagged eyes,

that pierce these fads"

The art of creating

Has lost it's judgement

It seems to have two left feet

With no original point of origin

They recycle the same ideas &

Try to pass them as new

With gemmed masks

That glitter dim

Hoping to blend in

Simple souls that rely on drugs

For that quantum leap

Just to pollute the freshness of their minds

For premature greatness

Until they regurgitate mentally

Transiently & motionlessly hover

Tracing with passion & bright colors

Sharing the same plain thoughts &

Midnight lovers

Grey streets map

Neon signs that read

"Come in tonight & be discovered"

Art in it's simplest form

Keeps out a lurking eye

Around abstract paranoia

Begging for a savior of new talents

In the golden streets of California

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  1. i like it dude yo read mine koo


  2. I like it :) This is bloody fantastic! You have a rare talent. Oh my, this is just so evocative!

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