Do you like or would you read this?

Question

ok i have written this start to this book and would like ur opinion (specially if it makes sense and all coz it does to me but i not sure bout everyone else)

it is not perfect yet and i expect to revise alot on it but i thought before i bother i should make sure it is a good story

you will find to little <inserted notes> that is because i couldn't think of the thing to put there at the time... (book titles and a witty line lol) so suggestions would be appreciative

so enough about me

(i had to create a blog thing to post it becuase it was a bit to big to put in here)

http://bookforyahooanswers.blogspot.com/

Answer 1

i would definately, but are you allowed to put some of harry potter in there with out copyright?

Answer 2

Actually it&#039;s really good. though I guess your age is about 15?

The handmaid&#039;s tale, by Margaret Atwood, The Red Queen by Margaret Drabble.

I am not so good at witty one liners.

I write fanfiction

Listed here are a few books that i have read the hope of improving my creative writing:

plus &#039;how to read like a writer&quot; by Francine Prose

Not now Jack, I am writing a Novel&quot; by Carmel Bird.

&quot;getting into character&quot; by Brandilyn Collins

&quot;the mysterious Case of the Misplaced Modifier&quot; by Bonnie Trenga

&quot;eats, shoots and leaves&quot; Lynne Truss

&quot;Zen in the Art of writing&quot; Ray Bradbury

editing made easy&#039; by Bruce Kaplan

Answer 3

I liked the story, the ending was good. Well, not the ending ending, the last thing you wrote. You need to add some stuff here and there (, ; . ! ? that stuff) I&#039;d read the rest of it if I could, but yeah id was good. I don&#039;t have any advice/answeres for you though, sorry!