Do you like that Mars video?

Question

It's an animation that I made with Terragen and then edited it on Adobe Premiere Pro.

Feel free to rate it.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cPwHAGcxESM&fmt=18

Answer 1

no

Answer 2

no.

Answer 3

Not bad - I could definitely not make such a thing, but I can offer some suggestions to make it better:

First of all - make the video fill the frame. I made a video in Adobe Premiere once that had the same problem, so I know it's an easy mistake to make in Premiere. You definitely need to fix it though.

Secondly, while a nice demo of rendering, it is not very interesting for more than a few seconds. I'd suggest that in stead of a techno track, you could record a voice over track, and narrate the scene as if it were a news report covering the status of the Mars teraforming project. Talk about how bodies of water are already possible due to the thicker atmosphere, and how clouds can be seen on the horizon. Be creative and make the discussion fit what's happening in the flyby.

Add a TV network logo and possibly a news crawl at the bottom, and you'll have something much more interesting and polished.

Like I said - I'm not criticizing the work itself - I couldn't make a video like that without spending months on it.... just offering an idea as to how to fill it out to be more interesting to people who aren't CGI enthusiasts.

Answer 4

Great Filming! It was good.

Answer 5

I liked the video but the music would suit a first person view in a roller coaster. For something mysterious and unknown you need slow overlapping chords...