Do you like the beginning of my book.It is a rough draft so bare with me.
I covered my ears trying to drown out the cries of the next victum in the basement.We only had this one for a week.It was a girl this time and she was worth about 3,000 dallors only because she was ten."Susie,please come down here",my mom yelled from downstairs.I dreaded getting closer to the sceaming but I dared not to disobey.I slowly got up and exited my room.The screams were disapating.I knew what that meant.I trotted down the stairs and entered the kitchen.My mom was standing at the table with a boy about nine.She motioned towards the boy and said,"Susie this is Bruce."She winked at me."Can you show him around?"
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