Do you like the poem i wrote

Question

my heart is so frozen

so stiff,

not even the warmest hug

can melt my frozen heart

nore a fires strongest rays

for you see you are the sun

that melts my frozen heart and

sets me free from this icy chamber

and carry me to your heart

witch is the warmest place to keep me

ok hope you liked it :)

Answer 1

yuuppppppppppp

its nice

but sadd

Answer 2

Yea, its pretty poetic, really gud.

Answer 3

yeah it's good but just with a little rhyming would be perfect!

Answer 4

What a load of ****! HAHAAA!

Answer 5

good startt =]]]]

i liked it

Answer 6

its ok but trying adding some rhyming

Answer 7

Not good enough.No offense but you need lots of practice.