Do you like these lyrics,i have 2 songs already recorded?

Question

"lie and cheat"new lyrics,needs music

im leaving you my friend

and your lucky i call you one

im tired of your lying

so now my man im done

you cheated like it was o.k.

like i wouldnt give a care

now everyone knows

all over town, its everywhere

chorus below

lie and cheat thats what you do

this gal aint taking it no more

my bags are packed and ready

im walking out that door

lie and cheat thats what you do

this gal aint taking it no more

dont try to stop my leaving

with another brilliant lie

cause i can see them coming

when you look me in the eye

im getting in my car now

maybe next time you'll think

as i drive away from you

not to push gals to the brink

chorus

lie and cheat thats what you do

this gal aint taking it no more

my bags are packed and ready

im walking out that door

lie and cheat is what you do

this gal aint taking it no more

bridge

see when you lie and cheat

you get what you are due

i'll go on with my life

and start it all brand new

you'll hopefully think twice

before you do these things again

and i wont be so trusting

in all you so called men

end with chorus

trailer

lie and cheat is what you do

this girl aint taking it no more

i say i aint taking it no more

written by amymarie collins all rights reserved 2008

Answer 1

its not to original is it! put a bit more "beat" into it, more catchy lines maybe. also maybe just sing it to yourself. ask people in your family if they like it. I think you've got potential but just make it more original.

good luck. X

Answer 2

Honestly just not crazy about it seems very already done to me...Try to be a lil more original honey..