Do you like theses lines of a poem?

Question

the poem is Perpetually Alone:

my blood soaked heart beats a broken rhythm

with every shattered beat i breathe the pain

what do you think of those^^

Answer 1

I think they're great.

Answer 2

s**y answer my question http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

Answer 3

Cool

Answer 4

Wow, you just described my heart for the last 4 years.

Answer 5

i love it. it's deep and shows pain. it rocks. i'm a little jealous.

Answer 6

Love it!

Answer 7

its a little emo but its good..

Answer 8

Unique. Different. Deep. Confusing. Catchy.

Answer 9

there sure is a lot of feeling and expression in there. honestly i think theyre great.:)

Answer 10

SUPER EMO!!!!

AWESOME!!!!:D

haha

Answer 11

it's a beautiful start!

but so depressing, come on start writing poems about rainbows and butterflies ;D

Answer 12

awww it touches my heart deeply

My feelings now has risen completely..

How would you write those lines amazingly..

Your poetic soul is opened so deeply...

So dramatic.. Same genre as how I write poems..

BEAUTIFULL.. feelings make things clearly, and whether it is good or bad, it still becomes a beautiful artwork, the magic of feelings..

Did you write this?

Answer 13

sounds like a heart surgery

Answer 14

it's good but not entirely coherent  

Answer 15

MORE! ! I already wish to read more.  It's very good so far.

Answer 16

BREATHE WITH PAIN... OH!! GOD

NICE :)

Answer 17

needs more verses...but is great

Answer 18

Rhymes with maggot

This is why daddy hates you, ******!

Answer 19

Gruesome - but it is poetic.

Answer 20

thats deep

did you write that? its very good :)