Do you like this Haiku?

Question

Sun glistens on sea

Dance twirling in summer rains

Beautiful rainbow

Answer 1

I think you need a little more discription but that is a great haiku!:)

Answer 2

I'd like it better if twirling came before dance.

Answer 3

that's so good. No it's not......it's great!!! I really do like it. Thank you for sharing that!

How can you produce such lovely summer poetry in Aussie winter....? we must be looking for warm comments to keep us going.

Cheers

Jellz

Answer 4

I like it very much, especially "dance twirling in summer rains"

Well done!

Answer 5

Yeah Jellz, maybe her warm thoughts/poetry help her to stay warm!

Nice Galactia.