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Do you like this Saturday morning poem?

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Saturday morning

by Cynthia S.

Morning has broken

gray, moldy

sky crazed, cracked

broken by lightening.

a roar of pain

presaging rain.

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I would put quotation marks around "Morning has broken," since it comes from an old gospel song made famous by the former Cat Stevens. The poem is very visual and to the point.
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Love lightning, rain...THUNDER....Weeeee!!!!

Good poem, gal! Short, to the veritable point, with the smoothness of mist conveying your points!

Goodonyer!
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kinda depressing for a Saturday morning but cute
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"Hi!",

Short, creative with a dismal Saturday morning outcast.

Well It's Saturday night here and you brought the rain with your poem which is good as my water tank has been running on empty and needs a re-fil, so we shore need it, in the desert of Australia.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )
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What... and now you live in the Chicago area! Or are you reading my mind and weather forecast! lol Nice. And yes, I like, whatever city or area being described.!
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Good morning, Good morning,

I think this poem report is from Fla.

Raining wet here too, stormy day

in view, raindrops love week-ends

it seems in In.

Like the poem, but it is so wet!
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yea pretty good
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Yes. It is short but conveys a mood undeniable.
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Love it
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It is good and applicable too as it is raining.
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