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You don’t know

Wow.

City lights,

vacant buildings,

so much wonder…

the water droplets

screamed

out of the sky,

trying to

escape

the clouds grasp

on them.

Racing,

ripples

of water

ripped through the gray,

endless abyss.

Gasping,

heart

thrusting

through my chest.

A-mazing!

Nothing

could end this.

The lights,

Glinting,

through the blur

of it all.

You can’t imagine

the beauty!

The oasis of blue.

The sapphire snake

rushed through the barren ground.

The river.

No one

understands.

Thoughts

rushing through

the surface of my

imaginative nature.

Beautiful.

Love for an

non-living thing.

The earth…

but wait it is

alive!

Blooming

with brilliance.

Containing all

joy.

Bring down…

lift up…

around and through!

You don’t know.

The water

gliding

across

everything.

Seeds sprouting!

Lives changed?

Do you know?

Better yet do you care?

No!

Take some time…

look around…

appreciate it,

live it!

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  1. Yesss omg i lovee it!  Its a great poem!


  2. Yeahh it's cool, but long lol

  3. ripples part is tight.

  4. its not bad, needs some editing. Try not to try so hard.are you a tree hugger ?

  5. Its fine, Is it poetry or are you play the word association game on your own?

  6. that is great you should write more

  7. i like it :)

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