Do you like this new Trigee?

Question

Phone Call – A Trigee

by C.S. Scotkin

Phone rings……….your voice

I answer….………..rejoice!

Ears hear…………..your heart

your heart………...hears mine!

Answer 1

It's a virus!  Could you do a Trigeeotemy?

Seriously, it's great. Seems someone very important called.

Answer 2

i like this very much...you have put in 15 words an awful lot of emotion...great stuff.

Answer 3

I agree with Plat, though; I do, finally, get what a trigee is meant to be.

Should I switch that first comma and the semicolon?

Answer 4

Excellent, elegant, wonderful!

Answer 5

Excellent, I know the joy of such phone calls, when I can hear the heart beating in tandem with mine, and the voice thrumming beneath it. Thanks.

Answer 6

I have no idea what a Trigee is.  But I am blown away that I like this.  

This is a successful thing.  

Answer 7

Very sweet Trigee.  Lovely write.  So many Trigees...It's Trigee-mania  

Answer 8

Now do the triple (quad)!  Enough playing around!  Oh, by the way, very nice.

Answer 9

Nice

Like the Trigee!!

- ♥ Taylor ♥

Answer 10

Excellent Trigee! This one seems particularly well suited to the form, and is a masterpiece of minimalism...less is more!