Do you like this poem, and what does it mean to you?

Question

What Do you think of my poem, what does it mean to you?After I will tell you. I need a name too for it?

Wiser, common advisor

We all lost

A new leap to keep moving

The cycle from stopping

Says

“Who we are”

When we get older

So does our folder

And any whole blind peace

Any Reminiscence of

Any innocence faded away

With our last rug tooth

Answer 1

I kinda like it, but it doesnt mean anything to me.

It just is okay!

Answer 2

I like the flow and rhythm, but other than that . . . it holds no meaning to me whatsoever. Older-folder rhyme doesn't make sense, I have no idea what a 'rug tooth' is . . . the wording just doesn't make sense.

Answer 3

Pardon my ignorance, but What is a 'rug tooth'?

None of this makes any sense, and rhyming such as 'older' and 'folder' doesn't help.

Poetry isn't about trying to mystify people, it is about communication - communicating feelings, ideas etc.

Sorry, but on that count you have scored really low.

Answer 4

It's kind of confusing, but it reminds me of feeling guilty and knowing i screwed up. but, i dont know, it doesnt really make much sense to me

Answer 5

I liked it..

go to untappedtalent.co.cc its my website, where i have posted many of the poems and songs I have wrote. I would love it for you to go and read some of them and give me some feedback.

thanks.

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