Do you like this poem? I made tis one?

Question

Okay I wrote a poem please tell me if you really like it, or not! Okay here it goes! This poem is called Writing is so Good.

To me writing is so good,

Writing a lot of stories,

Maybe action in the woods!

Writing about knights,

Hitting each other with swords

Knights so good at sword fighting,

I'd say there fighting lords!

C.S.Lewis, and J.R.R.Tolkien are my writing heroes,

They write awesome stories,

and their christianity is at ten,

And definately not at zero!

For writing that is all I have to say!

But you can see that I love writing,

But that is all today!

That was the end, and I wrote this poem myself please tell me if you like or not! Thanks!

Answer 1

You certainly have enthusiasm, but the content isn't brilliant.

I see you have tried to make it rhyme but it needs to be relevant.

Their Christianity is at ten etc. - what's all that about?

Keep at it, but discuss with a teacher or someone who can help you compose your ideas better.

I will look out for your next one.

Answer 2

ya it was really good. good job

Answer 3

Not that great.  Poetry is more than just simple rhymes.  You don't have to mention writing so much, just write.

Answer 4

This was a fantastic poem. It has so much detail and you really created the image of what was happening in my mind right away. A++