Do you like this poem I wrote? Thanks for the feedback?

Question

Black

and White

Dark and light

A vintage photo

Stars in the shady night

Black is sharp precise and intense

White is eye catching silky and dense

White is an angel sitting on the pearly gates

Black is a murderer giving someone their fate

White is the beginning and black is the end

Black is a foe and white is a friend

Black is coffee

White is cream

If they work together, they are an ideal team.

do you like this poem?

yes no, why why not, good, bad...

thankyou!

Answer 1

That's pretty good. I like it.

Answer 2

I personally like this poem.  You have used some nice descriptions and similes and your conclusion of two opposites working together is really good.  And you have acutally used rhyming which is always nice in a poem, and the meter flows fairly well.

Good job!!!

Answer 3

Not sure that I like the black/white contrast, but overall the content is nice.