Do you like this poem I wrote for my girlfriend?

Question

You are skinny but think you're chubby

You are beautiful but think you're ugly

I want to sleep with you and look in your eyes

Or we could stay awake and watch the sun rise

Whatever you want to do we can do it

If you want to build a kingdom good we can rule it

You can be my queen and I can be your king

You make me feel like an angel and you are my wings

You just arrested me in your love cuffs

People gone say we're to young and other bad stuff

Just tell them to get off our nuts

Your goofy and serious

I'll love to see you naked what can I say Im a frisky sagittarius

When we are older and Im your husband and your my wife

We having alot of kids at least 5

You make me feel eternal I can never die

You are my girl and Im your man

Im gonna give you the world the best I can

You can light me up when Im sad its like your my lighter

You are the flames thats in my fire

You say you want to be an actor well Im going to the next scene

Dang! I would have never thought I would have found my wife at the age of fourteen

I can't wait for that day when we both say I do

All Im saying is baby I love you

Answer 1

U started w/ indecision,then U made a lot of promises,and in the end ( the last line U summed the whole (poem) in one sentence "All I'm saying is baby I love you". And that was a nice ending.If U gonna read it to her, then, after marriage, prepare Ur self to deliver those promises, so see her naked, and have 5 kids.

I used to write this stuff when I was 11yo.U must be around this age to think of all this HAPPINESS. Good luck.. and may God give U 10 kids.