Do you like this poem? What do you think its about?

Question

Written by 15 year old for class.

“Wanting Control”

Using his blood to eliminate pain,

The only process that seems to function.

His cells pumping through my lunatic brain,

But love with hate can’t form a strong junction.

My skin lurks to devour his being,

But I don’t receive his soul, no control.

The wrong I’m incapable of seeing;

Inside him I can no longer consol.

No manipulation, I can’t command,

So I begin to eat at myself; crazed.

Now he pretends not to hear my demand,

So I sink in my own blood, fully dazed.

Answer 1

It is very depressing.

Answer 2

Perish the thought if it's a 15 yr old's writing. But.. it could be about a child that belongs to him that he can't control the destiny of, and he also uses the fact that he's not him, and that "eliminates the pain". It could be a child speakin about a father figure that he feels neglected by or that drives him crazy.. .. "His cells pumping through my lunatic brain,but love with hate can't form a strong junction.." But then he goes on to say "the wrong I'm incapable of seeing", so it seems to take on a more adult standpoint.. Wow, it's a doozie isn't it..? I like it.. very deep, very demanding. It could be about very little but the thoughts that surge through a teenagers mind of anger, and the fact that they never feel complete in their own body, so they take on the form of another.. Wheww. my brain hurts and I'm a English major. This kid has a future! He's great at revealing things on the page!  

Answer 3

it sort of reminds me of vampires...

Answer 4

uhm... it's really bloody. seems a little... morbid? or masochistic?