Do you like this poem?

Question

no more eyes

when i look to the sky

i really miss you

i remmember your eyes

when they tell me what to do

they talk so load

even if you dont wanna tell so.

i know what you want

i know what to do

i will do what you like

cause itsnt hard to understand you.

you scream alot

you scream so load

but you never move your lips

and you never open your mouth

as how i said

you move your eyes

when you move a lid

i get so wise

my problem is that

you dont care

when i get sad

you act so unfair

you shout to me

cause i let my feelings out

and you act to be

like stepped out

please tell me what to do

how can i live without seeing you

dont be harshand dont fly away

cause i know the end will be on this way

if you dont listen and you dont care

i ll talk to much to make it very fair

very fair for me to speak out loud

not only you laugh and shout

i am not coming back

to your h**l

i ll move on my way

to feel very well

no more eyes

Answer 1

I think this poem is written with a lot of frustration at someone.  Someone who doesnt like to listen to your pleas. I think it is a beautiful poem.

Answer 2

Wow expresses frustration and anger....nicely done though. I enjoyed reading it and feeling the anger!!!

Beautiful my friend...beautiful!!