Do you like this..............?

Question

I love you?

By: unknown

I used to never see

how you and I came to be.

We never were much of lovers

just two kids who liked each other

You and I were more like friends

that's why our relationship was destined to end.

I kept waiting for you to call

and when you didnt you made me feel small

When i ended it i never saw,

what was in front of me all along.

Today, i see things differently

I love you now, how can this be?

Your eyes, your smile, your hair.

They all put me in this mode of despair.

And now i sit here all alone

This pen and paper, and my phone.

Answer 1

yes it is cute i hope you get your man back

Answer 2

Iunno.. It kinda sounds.. Typical?

Answer 3

I agree with Toph. It's kind of unoriginal.

Also the syllables in each line are off- find a steady beat for it.

You began it with heartache and regret, and ended it with falling in love with the one who caused it. Not the best idea.