Do you like this rewrite of a poem I previously rote?

Question

Its cold outside, I don't wont to leave this car.

I want to stay in this heat, and listen to your heart beat.

I don't want those people, I can't call them parents.

To take the I away from U, cause their all symbols of ignorance.

I like to watch you smile, cause you've gotten pleasure,

that's when I know I've reached the end of the cave,

and I've found the treasure. Well sweet Its been you.

There's not a night, been not a dream. When you, I haven't seen.

Cause every special night, I'm sneaking out with you.

Who said I did anything, If they never knew.

Answer 1

I had a hard time reading this.  It's bad.  

Answer 2

Of the poems you have open right now this is the worst.  It sucks.  Typical, corny, angst ridden rubbish that you seem to think you are above.

1 to 5, five being the worst  (ratings done a scale of comparison to the other poets posting here)

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Answer 3

You better stay in the house and mind your parents, BOY.  

Answer 4

hahahahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh...

i like aj the first guys anwser..!!!!

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Answer 5

you certainly express your emotions in your poems.  

Answer 6

You really have amazing talent. I hope your putting your skills to good use. That's so beautiful. Keep it up