Do you like this <span title="poem?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?">poem?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...</span>

Question

Please honestly tell me what you think of this mothers day poem!!

A Flower

A flower is a flower you can pick one any time, but have you thought to ponder the beauty of its kind?

It’s sown then it’s grown everything unique, its petals to its roots have a sort of mystique.

Its petals are its personality, bubbly, thoughtful, sweet.

Its leaves are its Wisdom, in which stories are concrete.

Its roots are its foundation, steady, tough, and firm.

Yet when something has gone missing it wilts just like a fern. So what has gone that makes this flower so very incomplete? The stem, which is love, that can not ever be beat. Something is in common to the description of this piece?!

Why yes, of course, the flower has to be, no one more and no one less than gods very best, but who could that be? I hope you hardly had to guess, for the very best of all, is and will only be, my very own mommy.

Answer 1

Add something that could really touch her heart like:

without you mommy, that flower would wither or even die..

but, it&#039;s really a good poem

Answer 2

I don&#039;t like it personally. That&#039;s my opinion.

But i must say it&#039;s the idiots like 11dimensions who comment to say &quot;you can&#039;t report me because i was being honest&quot; and then sharing their political preference that makes me lose faith in humanity. Typical politician, being honest and sticking strictly to the rules in that way that&#039;s meant for harm or personal gain, yet is disguised as perfectly fine because it follows the rules. Get a life.

~sig~

7 days without soccer makes one weak

Answer 3

I like the first half of it, the second half falls apart for me and sounds very child like (not in a good way)

&quot;Yet when something has gone missing it wilts just like a fern&quot;

I would suggest changing this sentence i think it takes away from the first half which was pretty strong

Answer 4

i. like. it.

Answer 5

Honestly? It&#039;s c**p.

What does the flower symbolize? what&#039;s the theme? You can&#039;t just use a thesaurus for the phrase &quot;pretty flower&quot; and disperse them across the poem. Total c**p... awful, just awful.

And you guys can&#039;t report me because she said to tell her honestly.

I keeps it real like dat!

Answer 6

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Answer 7

i liked it

Answer 8

yes it is nice but your porson is not are you even a girl

Answer 9

its beatiful how&#039;d you come up with that i love how in the beginning you say a flower is a flower like it has a meaning but no one could find it i think your a great writer