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Do you love this poem?!!!!!!!!!?

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Behind your eyes

Your eyes they dull more each day. Each tiny light fades away. They bring the darkness and leave the light, always shifting left to right; watching closely on all unseen, keeping tabs on ghostly things.

Tears begin to brim your eye, giving life to what once seemed dry. Yet somewhere deep your flame is kindled underneath a weathered window. Unlock the door step inside toss a log to the side. Let the flame rise up again! Don’t smother what was once your joy; keep it close to who’s inside.

Behind your eyes there is a hope, never doubt always float. Sinking is a quitter’s turf, keep away and you won’t get hurt. Shrinking back from underneath the light, there really is no place to hide. Running will not help you now; face what’s there beneath your tear.

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  1. It has its moments, but it would be better as a song.  Then you could hide some of the wobbly rhymes.

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