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Do you see?

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Left in silence

Over and over again

Left… in light

I remember

Dying slowly

Killing solace

Onslaught of raindrops

Malcontent and segregated

Gallant sacrifice unheeded

Justice inverted in a

Knights’ kiss

Justice reborn in a

Key that she holds

Blessed Be in Hidden Humor, Siren

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  1. I see humor.  I see romance.  Very interesting.


  2. i love how nobody gets it.

    they should look a little closer.

  3. Don't know what poem is about...but, I loved the hidden humour

    LOL

    IDK

    OMG

    JK

    JK

    B......don't know that the last lines refer to.

    Bye

  4. The words lead

    To the edge

    And we see

    Above the chasm

    Through the facade

    To the core

    Internalized ventilation

    Quite nice, sic

  5. It is pretty but not quite sure what this is referring too! At first I thought it was the earth, that witnessed a death, am I even close here?  Cheers !!

  6. oh wow wow wow amazing *purr* I'm purring.. The poem is so good its s**y

  7. Justice reborn with the key, but the Fool will keep on opening doors away from Judgment. The Emperor will not notice his errant Knight but the Nine on the armor evokes questions pertaining to Two Cups. However, neither shall go to the Devil so long as the Tower shields them and the Moon shines down. Soon, the Chariot will take them, if the Wheel of Fortune spins there way. Two swords, two decisions, which shall it be...Eight staves at the crossroads.

    Get it? Got it? Good.

    Beautiful and eloquent poem, by the way, I hope my answer reflected what you wished seen.

    Edit: Just saw the acrostic, very cute, but you know I loathe text speak lingo. Therefore all humor is lost to frustration. I like my interpretation better. But...that doesn't mean it isn't beautiful.

  8. I hope JK isn't Just Kidding and it is for the other JK. If so it seems to be ironic humour for the person who DOES understand and know you. Call it "Coins" and it would fit. (coining phrases and two sides of a coin)

    I am trying to see and "get" it. great form and feel.

  9. i think i see..

    dont always tho, possibly

    killing the moment.

    obviously hiding, it almost escaped

    my clutch while the

    guards were busy eating cracker

    jacks and cleaning their

    knight armor.

    just thought youd like to

    know.  :)

  10. i love the choice of words. how its not too wordy, but gives it the meaning you want, and the message your trying to send. its somewhat simple, but holds lots of meaning in each line.
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