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Do you think I'm allowed to call this a sonnet (I probably will, anyways)?

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I have a crazy tendency to risk my heart too often.

I can put it on like armor which attacks soften.

I'm not sure if I can say whether it's right or wrong;

I know that it's been slowly killing me, all along.

I try harder to hide my love with other tendencies;

By acting like a "player", though they feel like enemies.

I can play around, when I forget how shy I am;

Pick my heart up, from the ground, and stand.

When I talk about my heart worn on my sleeve...

I'm treated like I've got tricks up my sleeves.

... While slowly my heart is bruised and bleeds.

It seems impossible; to start to truly fill its needs.

My mind's warnings; to keep it more guarded...

They're something that I can hardly ever heed.

- J.M.

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  1. Why not call it a "poem"?  That's what it is.  It is definitely NOT a sonnet. Why do you want to use that term anyway?

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