Do you think I could have finally written a Trigee?

Question

Trigee

By C.S. Scotkin

Cats sleep ………………lizard leaps

sofa backs support ………such a high jump!

Serengeti dreams…………will not be seen

predatory thoughts………. escaping.

Answer 1

I'm not a poet, and I know it,

but I do know when something's

a good read. Thanks for sharing.

Loved it, keep going.

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Answer 2

I think you done did it alright!

These are fun to write (most of the time).

Maybe I'll try one too...After I finish melting out in the garden!

Answer 3

MarvDondi may be right. But it is a fine effort for the first CS!

Trigees are tricky!

Answer 4

"By George, you've got it!" Forgive me, I can't carry a tune!

Answer 5

Kudos It is done did.

Answer 6

"By George, I think she's got it!"

(Sorry E., I didn't see your reply...ah well, great minds and all that.)

Answer 7

Love it!

Answer 8

Yeah, you did, now give it meter and rhyme, and try to do it without getting a headache.

Answer 9

Great with lots of imagination!!  Cheers!!

Answer 10

Go to the head of the class and get your diploma!  You can leap if you choose!  A good one.

Answer 11

Yes, you have trigeed with the rest of us. Don't worry, this form of poetry is hard to write, much less to master. You are not alone. (I think I wrote two...neither were that great) But this...this is wonderful, and, as usual, sproingy.

Answer 12

"Hi!",

That was great and made me chuckle.

WELL DONE!

Cheers : )