Do you think my fiance will like it?

Question

My Eyes

Look into my eyes and see how much I truly care.

I don’t ever mind when you begin to stare.

When you look deep enough, you see my love for you.

It’s the only thing that is always shining through.

Only you can see it; and when you do, I know.

You stare but a moment, but you never loose the glow.

The glow that says that you have seen right past the start;

You have seen beyond my eyes down to my very heart,

Although I tell you that I love you each and every day,

You can’t comprehend how much just by the things I say.

I know you have had those times when you have known for sure,

That all the things I say are true, and that my love is pure.

Those moments are the happiest my life can ever be,

‘Cause all I need is you to know that you are loved by me.

Answer 1

Pretty darn good, hon!

Answer 2

It's a lovely poem, full of emotion and feelings.  Your fiance should love it.  One small point though - line 7, shouldn't it say lose rather than loose?  I'm sure it is just a typo but it changes the meaning of the line.  Other than that it is superb.  I would love for someone to write me a poem like that - lucky fiance.

Answer 3

Good job! He should love it.