Do you think this is a good horror story?

Question

I wrote it a little while ago. please forgive the small errors. I'm only 14 I can't help it. Be honest..Even if it's brutal your opinion really matters to me. :) You should also know that it is a short horror story.

http://www.booksie.com/horror/short_story/sam316547/hush-little-baby-dont-say-a-word

Answer 1

You've got a real talent for writing - don't let that go! I'm 14 to and I love writing too, you have a gift and the saddest thing in the world is wasted talent. Write on girl, try for a book or beyond! You have the potential. (:

Answer 2

I personally thought it was beyond standard compared to some of the junk out there these days... Anyway, just so I don't have to rephrase myself, although I wouldn't mind, your story was brilliant, only I tend to sound repetitive, I commented on your link, my name is Alice.  

Answer 3

the writting was good. The story was creepy, so i guess that means good. keep writting you have talent.

Answer 4

For 14 its alright. With some editing it should be great. You have real potential though. Well done and good luck in the future

Answer 5

Love it (:

Answer 6

relaly realy thats mediuem