Do you think this is a good yugioh dark world deck rate 1-10 and fix if you can?

Question

Monsters: 19

1 Raviel, Lord of Phantasms

3 Goldd, Wu-Lord of Dark World

2 Sillva, Warlord of Dark World

2 Brron, Mad King of Dark World

2 Broww, Huntsman of Dark World

2 Newdoria

2 Kahkki, Guerilla of Dark World

2 Gren, Tactician of Dark World

2 Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World

1 Morphing Jar

Spells: 15

3 Dark World Dealings

2 Gateway to Dark World

2 Dark World Lightning

2 The Cheerful Coffin

2 Card of Safe Return

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Monster Reborn

1 Card Destruction

1 Heavy Storm

Traps: 7

2 Fine

1 Dark Deal

2 The Forces of Darkness

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

Answer 1

It's a real good deck. There's a lot of balance between those cards. I'd rate it 8/10. You could use a little more traps.

Answer 2

Well the only cards I saw that weren't in your deck should be in your deck.  You should check into getting Veil of Darkness and Mad Reloader.  Both cards work really well in this deck.  Veil might be a little hard to get as it is a Secret Rare, but if you can get it should fit this deck well.  All in all, though, the deck looks pretty good.  I'd give it an 8 out of 10.